You ever thought you were different? Well AJ and Eric know they are. On their fifteenth birthday, the twins are reunited with their faimly on to find out their true identity. The Elven prince's are taken back to their home world in a bid to save Erisanda and all of man kind from the spreading reign of The Shadow and its evil. Have you got any ideas that could make it better? And I've asked this once before but it got deleted =S any idea's why? Thanks in advance for all your help Start of Synopsis =D For Shardi... and what ever the rest of it is, it's not a shadow, that's just the name of the bad guy ... or woman, no-one knows ... yet!

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This isn't a synopsis. It's a premise. Synopsises are A LOT longer than this. They are about a page or two in length.

So this isn't exactly a synopsis. It's more of a summary that would go in your query. Taking that into consideration... Agents don't like it when queries start with rhetorical questions, so come up with a better gook. There are some grammer issues. And it should be less dry. Make it more exciting. A synopsis tells the entire story of your book. I can't exactly tell you the format of one, but http://misssnark.blogspot.com/2005_12_25_archive.html could help you. It's where a literary agent critiques synopsises.

Well, Its quite complicated. You could make it sound less simple, so a blunt peasant like myself could understand it. btw, the plot seems really interesting. I wish you luck on your way to a writers career. When your book is published, I'll definetly buy it ;)

sorry, i'm sure there are already books where people are trying to save mankind from an evil shadow. it's called 'basically every fantasy book that has ever existed'. try making a more original premise.