When a town that seemed indestructible becomes threatened, the inhabitants begin to panic. If the walls come down, and the outsiders come in, everything that the residents believed seems questionable. Lily Gerald has not let anyone in since her husband, whose disappearance tore her whole life apart. Her daughter, Fairy, was even more affected by her father leaving. She has never been able to let anyone in, not even when William, the guy she loved since kindergarten, sweeps her off her feet. William, the guy who everyone wants to be, isn’t exactly perfect either. When a prank he and his twin sister pulled went terribly wrong, he has been living under the impression it was his fault, that if he had done something, anything differently, she could have lived. Scared, he hides himself behind what he thinks is helping him, but could be pushing people away. His father, Michael, now fears for his son’s childhood. He can’t force his son to live life well, but he can’t watch him not do it either. Forcing him to make a decision he was forced to make a long time ago, a choice between safety and freedom, between insurance and risks, a choice that could shake up the town of Ara forever. This is the story of a tragedy, or a series of them, bringing a town closer together, and allowing everyone to face what they have been running from. I am 14, so obviously this isnt that good or like publishable or anything. just wondering what you thought. comments ?:)! ohh and its written from the POV of 5 characters four of them ar ementioned above Fairy Lily Michael William

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i like it. i definitely think you should write it and she were it takes you, it can be a really good story!!!

It is unnecessary to ask for approval. If you like this story idea, you should just write it. Don't worry about publishing or anything just yet. Just get it on paper and go from there. You can't do anything with it until it's written.

finish the story and send it to the press! i would so read it! =)