Writing a book? Web site? Promotional Materials? Want to
uplevel your already professional quality writing?
Whatever we write, we need to share it with our peers or
professionals for feedback before we present it to our paying audience.
Getting writing feedback has many benefits. Even though
you know your topic well, you may have some old writing sins lurking in your
copy. While a bit scary, if you can put your ego aside, you'll get valuable
ideas from others to make your writing more clear and inspiring. You will learn
how to identify your writing strengths and weaknesses, and you will develop
your own writing style and voice.
You can exchange feedback with your peers via email or
you can join a writing or book coaching group via telephone and email support
to those like minded who are committed to boosting their business success.
What to Give Feedback On
1. Does the opening grab your attention? How? Is it
clear?
2. What needs editing in syntax ? (grammar) Are tenses
consistent? Is it easy to understand?
3. Does it use strong verbs rather than linking (to be)
verbs?
Do the verbs advance the story and tighten the
writing?
4. Does your piece show, not tell? Do you use senses of
sight, sound, emotions, touch? Do you use creative non-fiction techniques such
as dialogue?
5. Does your piece over describe? Do you have
redundancies that slow your writing down?
6. Does your writing use adjectives and adverbs too
much? Do the nouns and verbs themselves describe?
7. Is it factually accurate?
8. Is it coherent? Does it flow and sound natural?
9. Are the dialogues believable? Does it have enough
dialogue?
10. Does the ending sum up or compel your reader to want
to keep reading?
If you wonder why your copy doesn't bring your clients
running to you, you may need to tweak it a bit. Submit it to a coach or peer
you trust. You'll look like the pro you already are.
Judy Cullins ©.
All Rights Reserved. ABOUT THE AUTHORJudy
Cullins, 20-year Book and Internet Marketing Coach and author of 10 books
including "Write Your eBook or Other Short Book Fast" offers free help through
her 2 monthly ezines, "The Book Coach Says. . .," and "Business Tip of the
Month" at
www.bookcoaching.com.