You did it. You
crafted the perfect query letter for your non-fiction book, and as a result, an
editor at a large publishing house has requested a full book proposal. At this
point, you have a 50/50 chance of seeing your work on a bookstore shelf. The
difference maker will be a strong book proposal that exhibits knowledge of your
audience, what that audience needs and wants, and how that audience can be
reached on a cost-effective basis.
When an editor makes a request to
see your book proposal, he/she will most likely send along a brief overview of
the publisher's book proposal guidelines. You might want to make some subtle
adjustments to your proposal in order to meet those guidelines. But under no
circumstances should you wait for a book proposal to be requested before
actually writing one. A well-written, professional book proposal takes several
days, oftentimes several weeks, to compose. It should be the first thing you
write before both the query letter and the manuscript itself. Despite
the guidelines, each proposal is unique, and the quality of yours will be THE
difference maker in determining whether or not the publisher takes a financial
risk with your book. So put your best effort into crafting a blockbuster book
proposal. Below, you'll find a list of the basic elements of a book proposal
that, if mastered, will all but guarantee the offer of a book contract.
Element #1: The Title Page/Table of Contents: The first page of a
book proposal is the title page. The title page states the working title for
the book you are proposing along with your contact information (and that of
your agent if you have one). Make sure to center the text. Generally, it isn't
wise to use fancy borders or cutesy graphics. You're writing a business
proposal. Make sure it looks like one. On the second page of your proposal,
provide a short table of contents for the book proposal itself. List each of
the following sections along with their corresponding page numbers: Summary,
About The Author, Audience, Competition, Publicity & Promotional
Opportunities, Outline, and Sample Chapters. Some will say the Outline and
Sample Chapter sections are optional, but remember, youre trying to sell
a book. Providing the publisher with a sample of your writing, especially if
you're a first-time author, might well mean the difference between acceptance
and rejection.
Element #2: Summary: In the Summary section of
your proposal, provide a brief overview of the proposed book. Try to envision
the blurb that will appear on the back cover of your final product. Make that
blurb the opening paragraph. Show the editor you can hook him/her on your
proposal from the very first sentence, and you'll convince them of your ability
to hook a potential reader as well. Elaborate on the contents of your query
letter by addressing the following subjects: the content, the audience, and the
author. What is the premise of your book? What does it promise its reader? Who
is the market for the book? How large is that market? And, finally, why are you
the best person to write this book at this time?
Element #3: About
The Author: In the About The Author section of your proposal, go into
greater detail about yourself. In general, it's best to use third person. But
it's okay to use first person if you feel more comfortable doing so. Why are
you the best qualified person to write this book? What are your credentials?
Are you an expert in the field? Has your previous work been published (not just
in books, but newspapers, magazines, ezines, etc.)? Are you a prolific public
speaker? If so, how many speeches do you give each year? To what types of
audiences do you speak? Do you have media experience or media contacts? If so,
let the editor know. If you have limited experience in any or all of these
fields, say so. Be honest and direct. Experience helps, but lack of experience
itself will not lead to rejection. Misrepresenting yourself will. Never include
information about your personal life unless it is essential to your ability to
sell the book.
Element #4: Audience: In the Audience section
of your proposal, clearly define the market for your book. First, identify the
demographic segment you hope to target. Examples of demographic characteristics
are gender, age, political ideology, religion, nationality, education level,
economic status, etc. Be specific. Research the size of the audience and back
up your claims with real numbers. Avoid broad claims such as "everyone will
love this book," and instead use such statements as "4.5 million
college-educated Christian men between the ages of 21 and 29 will be drawn to
this book because of its unique..." At this point, define the psychographics of
your audience. What is the motivation of this demographic to buy your book?
What unmet needs and wants do they harbor that your book is sure to satisfy? In
short, make certain your Audience section clearly indicates 1) who will buy
your book, and 2) why they will buy it.
Element #5:
Competition: In the Competition section of your proposal, provide examples
of well-known published books similar to yours (or, if your book covers a new
niche in a popular subject, list those books that target a similar audience).
Its always best to cite bestsellers. If you can track down the sales
figures for these books, provide the number of copies each title sold. The
larger the sales figures, the more you strengthen your case that a large market
exists for your subject matter. Once you've established that a large market
exists, explain why your book will be different. In what way will you position
your book in order to differentiate it from its peers? Do any demographic
trends aid your case for continued demand in this market? State explicitly why
your book is unique and why the market is ripe for its release. However, be
wary of a bold statement such as "nothing like my book has ever been written
before". You may have uncovered a unique angle for your subject, but in all
likelihood, you havent invented a new genre or field of study.
Element #6: Publicity and Promotional Opportunities: In this section of
your proposal, outline the promotional avenues open to your book. If you've
already established that a market exists, this section will be the make it or
break it section of your proposal. The publisher must know how you intend to
reach the audience you've identified. Do specific groups exist with a high
likelihood of being receptive to your book? Good examples are the audience
members of a specific radio or television show, readers of specific magazines
or newsletters, book clubs, non-profit organizations, or trade groups. Identify
the groups relevant to your book and point out the vehicles a publisher can use
to reach those groups in a cost-effective manner. Do you have media connections
or experience? Potential exposure on nationally syndicated radio and television
shows is the best way to capture a publishers attention. Booking the
author on such shows is free, and the resulting sales can be astronomical. So
publishers are always looking for authors with a media platform. Do you have
one? What angle or hook can you provide a producer or editor that will land you
a coveted interview or feature story? If you develop a strong enough hook, you
might land a book contract based on this aspect of your proposal alone.
Element #7: Outline: For this section of your proposal, provide a
list of the proposed chapter titles, along with a brief overview of the
contents therein.
Element #8: Sample Chapters: In this section
of your proposal, simply attach the first two or three chapters of your
proposed manuscript. Providing sample chapters is essential for a first-time
author. If your chapters are of high quality, they give the publisher
confidence you can produce a publishable manuscript in a timely manner.
Element #9: Presentation: The presentation of your book proposal is
as instrumental to its success as the content. Make sure to proofread
zealously. If you think you've finished, proofread it again. Read, correct, and
rewrite your proposal at least twenty times so as to be confident that it's the
best it can possibly be. When it comes time to print the final draft, the body
of the proposal should be double-spaced and printed in black ink on clean white
paper using a LaserJet printer. Finally, just as with any business document,
send your book proposal via FedEx. This will create the immediate impression
you are a professional who will be businesslike in his day-to-day dealings with
the publisher.
Once you've incorporated these nine elements into your
book proposal, you will be left with a finished product worthy of commanding
the respect of any editor. But in order to create a true blockbuster book
proposal, make sure to
Define the books concept. Identify the
books audience. And outline exactly how to reach that audience. Do these
three things well, and youre certain to obtain a book contract. So don't
waste any time. Get to work on your blockbuster book proposal
today!
ABOUT THE AUTHOR Britt Gillette is the author of The
Dittohead's Guide To Adult Beverages (Regnery 2005). He also runs The DVD
Report (
http://www.thedvdreport.com), a site showcasing his
personal reviews of movies and TV shows currently released on DVD.